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	• The Poison Apples Lily Archer Feiwel & Friends, 2007 - 288 pages average customer review:based on 6 reviews view larger image
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highly recommended

Excellent! Inside the heads of three teenage girls...

It's been a long time since I read something that so accurately recalls what it's like to be a teenage girl. Feeling out of place, growing up, taking on challenges, making friends - these are all themes explored in The Poison Apples. The book is a heartfelt story about three girls struggling to find themselves while they take their first steps outside the bosom of their once secure families. The girls eventually find each other and are able to rely on one another for support, as their families collapse around them. The book is wonderfully realistic, and each character is fully fleshed out and utterly believable. Like the best of teenage tales - I cringed and smiled as I read along, identifying with the protagonists. I look forward to future works from Ms. Archer.

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Great beginning

Rarely have I thought this about a book: but this book needed to be longer. The first section (more than half of the book) is clever, witty, and a pleasure to read. The three main characters are distinct from one another (although all written in oddly the same voice), each situation is well-depicted, and I both laughed with and sympathized with them.

However, once the three heroines have found one another and bonded over their wicked stepmothers, the book falters badly. In Part II, the three girls' romances are much too abrupt and undeveloped; their decision to seek revenge on their stepmothers is bumpy; and the actual execution of the revenge plots is just lame. The plots take each girl back home and away from all the others, which is a structural problem in the narrative; and each has only one chapter in which to 1) fail in her revenge; and 2) see that it wasn't a good idea in the first place. This needed a lot more thought.

Still, a very promising first book. I look forward to reading more by this author.

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The Poison Apples By: Lily Archer Book Review

Everyone knows the story of Snow White but have you ever heard of Molly Miller, Reena Paruchuri, or Alice Bingley-Beckerman? For one thing, their life is hardly a fairy-tale but everything is about to change. They just have to meet.
The Poison Apples By: Lily Archer opens with the tale of how three delightful friends Molly, Reena, and Alice end up at an elite boarding school in Massachusetts. Each chapter revolves around a father's second marriage and a stepmother who turns out to be quite horrible. The pals form a club to get revenge on their wicked stepmothers but find out that not all wrongs make a right.
This four star fictional novel is probably best suited for teenage girls who love to read about terrific friends who have to cope with major situations in their lives. The girls's loss of control over their own lives was very catastrophic. But their friendship went a long way to help when they were able to form their own little family with The Poison Apples. My favorite character was Reena Paruchuri because of her hilarious humor. (Archer, 20) "I hate yoga. I mean who wants to lie on the ground twisted up like a pretzel while some lady in velvet stirrup pants tells you to "relax"? And whenever I drive by a yoga studio (there are like ten billion here in Beverly Hills) and look through the windows there are crowds of skinny women is short-shorts, contouring themselves into freaky positions." Plus, Reena's stepmother Shanti Shruti is so insane and I think is truly bipolar. On page 112 Pradeep (Reena's brother) quotes, "So Shanti is adopting a penguin, but it needs, like, a really cold, like artic environment...so they're building and addition to the house, this, like, special terrarium or something with ice and water...and its costing Dad like a million dollars." I cannot in reality imagine someone wanting to buy a penguin out of the blue! I have to say that the book was a little confusing at times because each chapter focuses on one-girl and switches viewpoints at bit. The ending is truly magical when the girl's accept the saying "two wrongs don't make a right". Lily Archer's vastly engaging novel makes the reader want to scream out loud for a sequel to answer many unknown questions after reading. And who wouldn't after some romance, heartbreak, and plenty of laughter in The Poison Apples!

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smart, funny and right-on

I wish this book had been on my shelf when I was fourteen -- we need more smart books about smart girls coping with adolescence.

The book opens with the story of how each of three friends -- Molly, Reena and Alice -- ended up at a boarding school in Massachusetts. Each tale revolves around a father's second marriage, and a step-mother who turns out to be a raging terror. I might think the family dramas were overdrawn if I hadn't been personally witness to some equally terrible family collapses when my friends I were teenagers. The story of the girls' developing friendship and how they collectively cope with boarding school life and family travails remains engaging through the last page.

I can't seem to shake my continuing interest in adolescent fiction, maybe because the genre played such an important role in my own growing up. The Poison Apples validates my habit of tracking new releases...

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Does the proofreader speak English?

This was a great story. After reading the summary, I was expecting a little more activity with the Poison Apples group, but I wasn't disappointed in the story after I realized the group's activity wasn't really the main focus of the book. I'm not wild about the switching viewpoint format for books and this one was a little confusing from time to time, just at the beginning of new chapters. The girls didn't have distinctive voices--they all sounded like the same person (almost as if the book had been written by one person instead of three!)--so that accounts for the minor confusion from chapter to chapter.

There is no magic at all in the story. It is not a retelling of a fairy tale.

For those who care about such things: there is repeated taking of the name of the Lord in vain. There are a couple of references to teens having sex, but none are depicted in this book. Personally, of those two, only the taking of the Lord's name in vain was offensive.

However, the most greivous offense was on the part of the publisher. Who proofread this book--one of Amazon's customer service reps? There's a word missing about every five or six pages and it's usually the word "a" which is what makes it so noticeable. The book is frequently missing words like "a" and "the" and at least one sentence is unedited (uses the word "already" twice when it should only be there once). You might consider this being overly fastidious, but I wasn't. The mistakes thrust themselves upon my notice.

Armed with that info, enjoy the story, and let's hope the publisher decides to employ a (new) proofreader.

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We all know the stories of Cinderella, Snow White, and Rapunzel. But have you ever heard of Alice Bingley-Beckerman, Reena Paruchuri, or Molly Miller? Of course you haven?t. Not yet. What these girls have in common with their fairy tale sisters is this: they are the stepdaughters of three very evil stepmothers. And they?re not happy about it. They think they are alone in their unhappiness until they arrive at Putnam Mount McKinsey, a posh boarding school located in lovely rural Massachusetts. Here is where they will plot their revenge. But first they have to meet.

In her first novel, Lily Archer tells a knowing, wickedly funny story about how friendship just may turn out to be more happily-ever-after than family.

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